It's quite good, but remember, you don't always have to rhyme. Also, death is quite beautiful, and Satan IS a saviour. But that's just my opinion and we're all entitled to our own. I'm just trying to give you an honest somment. Still, well done.

this is really good! its different and creative. great job!

Awesome poem, keep up the good work... P.S. thanks for the comments and messages.

Jason

that was excellent!!!!! ah, i could picture everything ....very imaginative and very creative....keep up the beautiful work!

Hey Shana, you just bumped my poem down a spot on the Dark/Fantasy section.... Thanks a lot..
jk... good job, and keep on writing

o seriously lol I never check, I wonder what its at I must see lol, hehe, someone will probly vote me down anyway like people ussually do to take my spot lol