great poem i can relate to every word in this poem. my ex is the same way so i can understand what you are going through. very well written poem keep up the greta work |
by Sean Allen
Technically speaking, this poem was pretty good. There are a few problems concerning how uniform the rhythm is. Anyhow, that out of the way (I usually start comments with actual critiques), I thought this was a good poem. I really do know the experience you are talking about, and hearing the same experience from a different person's perspective is always enlightening! |