Comments : Chain of Misery

  • 20 years ago

    by Bobby Brownlie

    great poem i can relate to every word in this poem. my ex is the same way so i can understand what you are going through. very well written poem keep up the greta work
    take care and i hope everything works out for you
    -bobby-

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Technically speaking, this poem was pretty good. There are a few problems concerning how uniform the rhythm is. Anyhow, that out of the way (I usually start comments with actual critiques), I thought this was a good poem. I really do know the experience you are talking about, and hearing the same experience from a different person's perspective is always enlightening!