Rose of the World

by Rachel   Nov 15, 2004


I dream of you at night
I think of you at day
I've hungered for your touch
But I don't know what to say

I see you look at other girls
And I want to read your mind
To see if you like me too
But love is truly blind

If you knew how much I cared
And if only I could show
How much I really need you
Your love for me might grow

My friends say you like me
I tell them it's not true
You've fallen for some other girl
But now she doesn't like you

You keep going back and forth
Somehow you just don't see
No matter what you do
You still belong to me

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    The last line definitely added an interesting twist to the whole poem, and added the new "ownership" dimention to this relationship, which I think is interesting. For some reason I don't like the pacing of the third stanza, but I'm not really sure why.