Loving you is my sin

by Jose Herrera   Nov 15, 2004


Loving you is my sin, don't care about other things but you.

I twirl around with mi vida not knowing where I will land, but in this life the world landed you to me.

I risk myself not caring what people say, all I know that you are the one.

Loving you is my sin, because god so wonderful lay his light on us.

You are mi amor, the love that comes from my heart heating up like a volcano, but trembling like a earthquake because the way you make me feel.

There is so many reasons but they all bunch together becoming one.

YOU..

Loving you is my sin.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by melissa

    ur a good writer, keep up the good work.

  • 20 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    I love the interplay of Spanish midst the English.

  • 20 years ago

    by brin macnamara

    kumar is spot on.
    Your poem is beautiful. I like all your work.

  • 20 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Love is never or was a sin..but loving someone more than what they deserve is according to me a sin...Beautiful poem...keep writing and take care....FIVE>>>

  • 20 years ago

    by Jose Herrera

    read and rated my poem it will e great thanks