Comments : Ever?

  • 20 years ago

    by Feathered Ice

    Have you had cold showers of pain? My friend, you've stood in my rain. Deathly feeling of loneliness, No need to feel shameless. I've been there before.

  • 20 years ago

    by .x.PorteR.x.

    Awesome work dahl! keep it up!

    Luv ya,

    PorteR =D

  • 20 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    "Do you ever wish they’d realize,
    That you know their constant lie?"

    Yes i do, i really REALLY liked your poem. Nicely written.

    Take Care, xx - Kalah