God take my hand

by Alyssa Aka: lyssa   Nov 15, 2004


She began to sit on the floor with three items
Putting them in a half circle around her
A knife laid on her right side
She was getting ready to hold god's hand
In front of her, the bible lies
Closing her eyes to imagine what he is truly like
The third item that lays on her left was a letter
She wrote it two days ago
Grabbing the bible she whispers a phrase:

"God take my hand
Bring me to your land"

She then took the knife in her hand
Started to cut the big blue vein
Red all over and she goes into a daze
She holds out her hands when she sees the light
She then falls to the floor, mother hearing a sound
She goes and checks it out
Sees her daughter on the floor in blood
Sees a letter next to her and reads

"My heart and soul were withering away
I know deep down I have betrayed
Take a breath and realize it is okay
I had to take my life, it was very gray
God open hes arms and brought me in
So I took this knife drew a line that was thin
Spoke the words for god to hear
Now my life will live without fear"

She busted into tears of sadness
Knowing she could of prevented this if she would of talked to her own daughter
At the end of the letter it was signed we her name and a kiss of red lipstick!

By:Lyssa..... well this poem was created for some reason, i just want to be free and speak my mind, i can't write that i am depressed because i am afraid of what people will think so i make it in third person! Comment and vote Thanks

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  • 19 years ago

    by kate

    lssa this was one of your best poems I've read keep up the good work lots love, love baby kate

  • 20 years ago

    by Alyssa Aka: lyssa

    Ya i totally agree gurl, thanks for ur input! Keep it up gurl! Lyssa

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    awesome as usually lyss!!

    well, let's see! I think it should all just be illegal... I am against it, and I understand that Rape is pretty much the only reason that anyone should ever have one... And if you are raped, I think you should get the pill thing, and the after night thing...

    but why wait to kill the growing baby... that's just fu ck ing ingnorant... :'(