by Abep
This is an amazing poem or song. I hope youre not contiplating scuicide. I know life is hard, it sucks. About that line about "what will i wear? and "what should i do with this bad hair?" Well i feel like i have to fit in like everyone. Act a certain way to be liked. I hate that because thats not me.I feel like looks do matter because i feel like i have nothin else going for me, but deep inside i know im better than this. I hate myself, because i dont even know who i am. I hate acting dumb, when i'm really not, I hate being "pretty" when im just like everyone else. I see my friends and wonder would they like me for who i really am? And you know whats sad i dont know. I feel as if they knew the real me they wouldn't even consider me as a frienD. I ve been so close to scuicide, but here i am. I know people hurt you, but prove to them your the better person. Just think about all the good reasons youre here today. |
by Krete
pretty good |
ok at the begining i wasn't feeling it but closer to the I started to love it. I figure that suicide is for people who are weak and I am a strong person so I might have thought about a few times but that isn't worth it. It's better to be a unique indivisual than all the same. and about that no emotions thing u can't please everyone but if u care u might brighten up somebodies day. nice poem |
Hey, this was a really amazing poem! it was filled with deep emotion, deep anger and deep frustration- i loved the wway your poem flowed, i hope your ok and that you see that suicide is not the answer, keep writting, you are a great poet! love kay xxxx |
by Jacob Davis
Thanx to everyone for commenting, trust me, I am not near contemplation of suicide, I just have my days when I wonder what life would be like without me, that's all. Once again, tahnx for the comments, keep 'em comin'. |
by Lucy
i respect you as a poet, your great and real and your depth is obvious and i enjoy every written line...wonderful |