hey i liked this, it was so cool, i like how alot of the lines begin with the word Love, its really awesome, thanx for commenting my poem, it means alot, barely anybody comments on my poems....well anything thanx again |
by Dark Savior
i enjoy your poems dani, i always enjoy reading the new ones and i like to comment on them. I know that there is a lot of uniquiness that is in you and i enjoy reading your poems. |
by Jaime
Lots of thought put in that.. very nice I gave ya a five. XoX. |
by Eibutsina
WHOA you are going on my faves list hun seriously fantasic work - your poems are so unique i admire and respect that very much and it makes them even more enjoyable to read! |
by R F
Hello Darky ( lol wait until i find u another nickname) |
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by candace
i liked how you expressed it well i enjoyed your poems this was the last one i read so imma tell you here that you have great talent and keep writ |
by Noelle k.
wow this is another great poem 5. i added you to my fav |
by Allissa
the reason why u dont no how it feels like it because love it now a feeling its an action.....love sucks anywayz |
by GoodMorning
your poems are amazing! =) |
by Ashley
thanks for your comment...i like this poem btw. |
by Gerard Kurt
Beautiful poem. A poem well explaining the truth about love. Those who misinterpet the feeling should read this to understand. |
this poem is very true, VERY true....also a little comical, great job. 5/5 |
by Red Charm
Really great poem |
by Kia
awesome poem great job |
I believe you meant "indescribable" instead of "indescrible." |
by Jenn
i like this poem cause i would never be able to write something like this not one as good as this... any way.... your a good poet cause you can write about more than one thing me i write about depression you can write about mutipule things witch is a good thing to be able to do so0o0o0o i give you a 5/5 |
I like this poem its very heart felt poem it express the way some people see love and how it makes you feel good job i love it keep up the good work god bless |
by jenpiglet17
Hey this poem was really good! i love how you compare it to a lot of things. i know id never be able to write like that and have such a big influence in my writing. 5/5! |
by Mister 47
I can totaly agree with you on the last sentence , |