by Cara
I like this one.. i like the structure, its something i havent seen before.. or i dont remember seeing it. you rhymed things that were from different stanzas.. interesting. |
by Faithless
Nope...with this poem you make love not juz a four letter word...itz is juz filled with a colourful world...i like the part where u said: |
by ilu
That was an amazing poem!!!!.. |
by Brittany C
Hmm, most of the wording was ok but the repetition was a little much. However everything else about the pome was great. I gave it a 5/5. |