She was perfect

by spunk   Nov 15, 2004


She was a perfect girl
her face was on the magazine
it was every girls dream to be like her
she had the world in her hands
her hair was silky smooth
her smile looked so happy
her eyes glistened from the camera flash
she was thin and beautiful
she was perfect

i saw a sick girl on t.v
then i realized it was her
her hair was thin and dry
her completion was pale
i could see her bones peaking through her skin
she was horrible
her eyes could barely open
her heart beating slowly
her life was in the doctors hands
all of this because...
she was dying to be perfect

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  • 19 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    i love the style mate.......thanx fer commenting on mine, and i think that vix is right, that thin isnt that great.....not if youre too thin...oh well mate....keep writing

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristina

    this is good and sad...im reading a book exactly like that good job!~kristina

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