You're gone =)

by Lil Luce   Nov 15, 2004


My blood still pumps
beating inside,
My heart still jumps
although it's died.

My heart still beats
but is it for you?
My eyes still weep
are they yours too?

My tears have been shed
now you've left me alone,
My dreams, on a thread
have broken and gone.

My life was driven
now its on track,
My heart was given
I now want it back.

My smiles still here
And its not ‘cos of you
My life still lives
Even though we are through.

~please comment and tell me what you think~thanks~

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    its good, spesh like the lines

    My blood still pumps
    beating inside,
    My heart still jumps
    although it's died.
    keep writin!

    lu -x-x-x-

  • 20 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    aww thanks that means a lot!i no its not very gud i just wrote it cos i wo bord but ur comment is really appreciated thanks xx

  • 20 years ago

    by Alaleighea

    it has a very nice flow to it even if the attempt at rhyming is a little weak its still a great poem ^.^ i give it a 4... it definatly deserves better than that 1 someone gave it!

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