Missing

by blarg   Nov 15, 2004


I'm missing
missing a lot of things
pieces of me
forgotten dreams

I'm missing him
my true love
he flew away for a while
like a pure white dove

I'm missing life
at it's best
this trial
is putting me to the test

I'm missing family
I'm missing friends
I'm missing beginnings
I'm missing ends

I'm missing the world
thats passing me by
I'm missing myself
as away i fly

I'm missing everything
in my coma-like state
I'm missing love
in my life filled with hate

this started out as a love poem, but kind of evolved into my feelings at this point in time. PLZ COMMENT/VOTE MUCH THANKS!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    I really liked that, keep up the good work!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Traci

    very nice poem keep writing.

  • 20 years ago

    by Ð맆îñ¥

    i reallllly like this. it kinda sounds like a train of thought. its very good. thanks for commenting on mine btw

  • 20 years ago

    by blarg

    thank you, i really appreciate it when people take the time to read my poems+comment!

  • 20 years ago

    by blarg

    much thanks to anyone for their thoughts about my poem!! love you all!blarg

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