by Shana Nov 15, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I hear many voices |
by Amanda
It is very deep but very good! Keep it up :) |
by Kalika
I liked it, but the rhyming sounded a little forced sometimes, but other than that it was an awesome poem.....I'm sorry someone you know killed himself, that is terrible..... |
Thats a really great poem i really like it alot...but ur a little heavy on the literal rhyming....cool it a lil...maybe every few lines or something. but i can really imagine the story behind it. |
by Dorotea©
I liked it. It was well written. The only thing I would change about it is that the flow is a bit awkward at the end of the first line and some other ones too, so if you would change it a bit then it might be better. But over all a very good poem, keep on writing. |
by Chad Reamer
This was really good 5/5 |