Another awesome poem, I'm sorry to hear about your friend, keep on writing them, you know I have enjoyed them all. Morbid or not, it doesn't matter. haha, take care

that is so sad! very good poem tho, keep it up!

thtis hit a nerve in me 4 personal reasons .. i lost mybro thru a suicde he shot himself .. but ur poem was very good .. amazing job

Wow very deep, very sad, I can relate my best friend hung himself... I nkow what this is like thank-you for having the courage to write it

Wow, it made me cry : ( I know how you feel. I lost a friend too. She hung herself because all the people that were mean to her. Can you please comment on it? its called 'my friend kim' I'm really sorry you lost your friend. I know it hurts terribly. But do know that he's in a better place, looking down on you and wouldn't want you to be sad. ~Lots of love~ *take care*

Truly an awesome poem, I enjoyed reading it. Although very sad and everyone feels like no1 cares..at times..not a good feeling at all. I love your poems and I'll comment more :) Do peek at mine if you don't mind ;) -Much love and hope-Tori*

you are a very gifted writer!!! don't ever stop writing cuz i want to hear what you have to say!! love forever, blarg!

WOW! Thats AWSOME! i love the idea and very well written. I dont like some of the lenghts of the lines too short or too long because it can feel jubled and harder to flow- but an awsome job all the same!
luv ya!
kt

awesome poem, i like the first & second stanzas... very good!

OMG, that was such a sad sad poem, I LOVED IT THOU. It's sooooo sad. I can't get over it. You did such an AMAZING job writing it. it was one of those poems that you wish was like a story. wow you did an GREAT JOB it flowed really well, and kept my attention the whole way threw.....5/5
take care
Scooby

I love that poem..I'm gonna tell everyone about that! Amazing!
-Ashlee-

That was very well written though it was so sad. I have problems writing of death and suicide. I have tried and only written one....I don't like it though. Anyway very good....hope you are doing ok....Keep it up....Happy Holidays!

haha you said you wanted a suprise when you got home from school. haha SUPRISE! Very well written 5/5

That's a great poem, written with feeling and a pattern. Keep it up!

wow exellent job on this poem so sad about ur friend! keep writing. if you get a chance check out some of mine! Thanx!

This was really good 5/5

I liked it. It was well written. The only thing I would change about it is that the flow is a bit awkward at the end of the first line and some other ones too, so if you would change it a bit then it might be better. But over all a very good poem, keep on writing.
SatuzKa

Thats a really great poem i really like it alot...but ur a little heavy on the literal rhyming....cool it a lil...maybe every few lines or something. but i can really imagine the story behind it.

I liked it, but the rhyming sounded a little forced sometimes, but other than that it was an awesome poem.....I'm sorry someone you know killed himself, that is terrible.....

Kalika

It is very deep but very good! Keep it up :)