Comments : I'm On Stage

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! this is...i cant explain it...amazing!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by RyanSmith

    that explains exactly what it is like to be a young teenager from what I can remember. You have all these new feelings that you don't what the hell to make of them. So you just try to not let anyone know that you are a walking ball of emotions and laugh everything off as a joke and try to act cool. I love this poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Infinite*

    Really, really good. you've used a really original rhythm that makes it flow brilliantly- it actually sounds the way people talk when performing. PROPA BO! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Wow. Mind blowing.