Comments : Feelings from within

  • 19 years ago

    by lovely__

    HEY!!! i totally get that feeling..so complicated..hey welll you have done a real good job take care
    keep those poems cumin in..even thought it was really good..try add more rhyme =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    "I often sit and think about you
    And what could have happened if you stayed."

    "It hurts to see you,
    But it hurts more to not."

    "I wish I could have made you happy,
    But I obviously couldn't.
    So you went out
    And found yourself a better woman."

    nice lines....
    i can totally relate to ure poem,its like ure saying what i wanna say...