I rate a perfect 5 ***** good job i really like it! Even though love poems are not my favorite, this one has made me look past that... Good job I love the flow!!! keep it up

boooo to whoever gave him a bad rating lol

Wow, great job! Beautiful in every way!

I know it seems like I strayed from the point in this poem, but I did that on purpose. It is just kind of showing that even with love in a relationship, people can still be unhappy.

I loved this poem! It was an excellent way to express how you are feeling... I didn't find it confusing at all... probably because I can relate to it a lot. Either way, it was great... and don't let anyone tell you different! =) Take care and keep writing!

Loved it as usual... you will go very far no doubt

Beautiful poem! Your technique is just incredible! Keep up the great work! ~God Bless
Bethany

Once again another wonderful poem. You are a great writer. Keep it up!

Keep your head up!
Baby~B
Crazyblonde4life2007@yahoo.com

woow! i really loved this poem ! its really nice ! thanxx for ur comment!

Awh, Jason, did you write this for me? lol thanks for commenting on my poem. Ill read more and comment. It was very good... youre on my favorites list

awsome work :D
gr8 poem one off my fav
always smileeeee
peaceeeee

So great i love it alot nice work