by Dawn Manna Nov 16, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The light shines on his hair |
by Cella Bella
I think you, he kisses my head, lol. This is one of my favorite of your poems. It had a really could flow and great vocab. 5/5 |
by Dawn Manna
thank you so much for commenting on my poems. it means a great deal to me. i will return the favor |
He kisses his head? Great poem, love the ending too. awesome idea keep writing! |