Comments : Making sweet love

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    He kisses his head? Great poem, love the ending too. awesome idea keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dawn Manna

    thank you so much for commenting on my poems. it means a great deal to me. i will return the favor

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I think you, he kisses my head, lol. This is one of my favorite of your poems. It had a really could flow and great vocab. 5/5

    marcella