by Jenn
heyy i loved your poem and i soo feel the same. i have a poem that i wrote just today and i think you would like it. it's called , to my people, for some reason when i read your poem i thought about how i fell right now and the first thing i thought of was my poem.. our poems are very similar and have the same idea. i would love it if you could read my poem and comment on wat you thought of it.. it would mean a lot to me... well till next time i'll ttyl |
by Jenn
haha oopss |
by BaybeBlew
Awesome poem, I've never cut, and I'm kind of against the idea, probably just because I don't understand but its awesome how you worded this entire poem, good job. |
by Krete
Such a Good Title. Such a Good Poem! |
oh, the chills runnin thru my spine. i used to be a cutter (still occasionally go back) and well , i just wanted to say that this was an amazing poem & i prolly sound like everyone else but i truly just love this b/c i know, i know...lol. well, u can get help if u truly want to quit. its hard but all can do it. loves. |
by Lil Luce
wow great hard hittin poem!LUCY XX |
by sami
this was exactly how i feel you described it very well this is something i can show someone who wants to understand why and why he shouldnt judge me |
by Just me
I used to cut and i realized it doesnt do anything but make it worse... I hid my feelings for so long so i know were your commin from..great poem.. |
by Kara
that's the best poem ive read that really helps thanx i know how it feels and ive stopped and i hope you can too keep on writing |
by EpithetPoet
Wow that was wonderful. I can relate to it too, i stop off and on but it's one of those things that's so hard to quit because you start to rely on it. I like the part that each cut tells a different story, because it's so true, i also liked the ending, even though i hide mine under my watch. Very nicely done! |
Hey,, this was an excellent poem... I know how you feel... Though, i've stopped cutting before i got carried away with it..... But i know what you mean... Take Care |
by Jacob Davis
Great poem, I do understand what you feel, although I don't cut, I have before, but it's hard to relieve my self with self infliction when I have close to no pain threshhold. Great Poem Tho. |
by Lauren Lee
Great poem! I cut to so i completely understand! Love, lauren |
by Queen Marlene
wow!! that is so beautiful!!! i can relate to this poem cause i am a very smiley talkative person but no one ever sees the real me!!! the one inside!! all they see is the pretty face!!! |
by Ryan
Hey that was an awesome poem all u need to work on is your parallelism... try reading some of mine.... |
by callie
wow... totally awesome. i like the last part a lot. you have a lot of talent. keep writing! |
by kathy
thats is so good and i know personally thats its true |
whoa, i am speechless, that poem was truly amazing, you couldnt improve it any better, u have enormous talent, dont put it to waste, xox ~*~samz~*~ |
by *K~L~C*
very good poem! and i wish the best for you! i know its hard and im not judging you cuz ive tried cutting but it just doesnt help but it does for you and if thats the only source of relief for you so be it i just hope that you can keep living and keep writing! luvd it |
by Debra
i kno exactly what u mean (being 1 oth those ppl hu has done it 2) & it's amazing how u put it in2 such good words. ur poems r great, keep writing. |