wow, i thought this was really amazing, such good rhyming and wording, a nicely written poem! i loved it, keep it up and thanks a bunch for your comment :) x x x x

excellent poem!

Awesome poem, very fluent and well worded.

A very good poem. Don't stop writing.

Wow..I liked it:) Great Work... Keep on writing:) Check some of mine if you have the time:D... I'm going to check other ones.. *God Bless*
<3Love, Sedusha<3

Good Poem.

wow... its a really good poem, i gave it a 5... but do you hate your mom that much?

Em, have you tried to speak this one out? Cuase when i did it sounded very start and stop you know? Like it had no proper flow...and was....fragile.

Nice issue, but i'd try and smooth it out a little.

wow,great job.but does your mom really treat you this way??

yeah, she actually does!
it sux thats why i'm moving to my dads.

Wonderful poem. Absolutley wonderful!

xx - Kalah

Wow...this poem has so much emotion, it means so much, Im so sorry if this is true, I hope things get better as soon as possible, but your writing is beautiful...Keep ur head up! LiL One

full of talent, is this truth to you? very good