Americas Diet Plan

by Shana   Nov 16, 2004


Have you ever noticed everything is low carbs?
It's just crazy
If you look around the world many starve
Why are we so lazy?

Go out and exercise
"Lose 15 pounds in 1 week"
Don't listen to those lies
This ridiculous diet plan is at its peak

Don't sit around
To wonder why your not losing weight
Mad I may sound
Its not to late

Your diet will drain every penny out of your salary
Don't drive your car to work, walk, throw out the keys
Stop eating everything that is low on calories
Do extra activities

Don't go and purge
Get rid of your diet pills
A better you will emerge
Now you can pay your bills

You can be healthy
Believe it or not
You don't have to be wealthy
Don't sit around and let yourself rot

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  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    HEY!!!! Where You Been? You Need To Write More... HAHA, i'm bored.

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Don't change anything it's awesome:) And your right you do not have to go crazy cut back and excersise it works I lost ten punds in two months

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    i like it too! it is very true.

  • 20 years ago

    by Shana

    ya i was'nt to happy about this poem, i knew there was something a bit wrong about it, I will improve on making parts of it a little more clear... Thankyou for your thoughts about this poem... :P Maybe ritalin may help your weird mood
    j/k

  • 20 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Differant, i like it. So very true. The internet is making people lazy. You can just sit on your butt, and order almost anything. Keep up the good writing. Check Out "Dying to Be Born", if you have a chance.

    Jason

    P.s. Spelling error. Your, instead of Tour

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