Excellent poem. I really liked it. And I agree with Worthless, very nice ending! :)

wow very scary! i like it!

hey hey, I gave it a 5 good job! keep it up I love your poems!!! lol thx for being there for all my poems :P

dark and creative, i love it!

Amazing just like the rest!

Interesting approach to the vampiric mystique. Almost like a parent to a child, guiding them in the care of a newly acquired pet. Works well.

WOAHHHH...all i can say is powerful poem!! great job!!!
really mysterious and dark..excellent!

Great poem! Kinda mysterious! I like it though! Great job and keep up the great writing! Please check out myne. Thanks!

Wow I really like this. Great rhyming and rythem. Keep up the good work.

Keep your head up!
Baby~B
Crazyblonde4life2007@yahoo.com

oh that is really well written.

I like the title too.

That was ... amazing.

btw- thank you for commenting on some of my poems!

Hey... this was very good.... I loved it alot... You have talent i got to say... Keep on writing please.... And Take Care
Angel

P.s. That you for reading my story and poem.. Take care

Great poem. Simple but deep. I like the rythm as well. It doesnt get you lost in the words. It really was touching.

§The only Rose in this Desert§

Awesome. Very touching. I really like the ending..though i dont really agree. We arent going to all go to hell. Only those who have lived their lives in sin. But regardless of that, it was a really amazing poem. Short to the point rythm.

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

that was kewl..

Good poem. Not exactly spectacular, but bursting with talent. Well done. 5/5