You have talent. Keep it up. The way you worded this poem was awesome. I really like it.

great poem...

This was great... I think everyone said what i would say... soooo then i gues i'll just say you rock... hehe keep up the good work.. Take Care
Angel

I really liked this poem. Very good hun! :) Thanks for the comment, take care!

hey sarah thank you alot for commenting on mine you have talent keep it up when your down or in love write your feelings cause thats where the best peoms come from good job
--felicia

This is a tremendously revealing poem, and I congratulate you for having the courage to reveal so much emotion and self-image in a posted poem. And as it is, it's also an "Excellent"-ly written revelation, IMHO. Great work.

omg!! this poem is amzing i gave it a 5 well done luv ya xx

hey this poem was very touching. i wish i had a girlfriend as sweet as you but everytime i have a girlfriend i get cheated on. but it's ok life goes on. i am really happy for you. if a girl ever wrote me something like this i would cry. this was very sweet. great job. keep it up girl!!!!
take care
-bobby-

hey Sarah:) this piece was soo beautiful and loving...Girl you should keep on writing:p.. I really liked this poem and I'm going to send it to my hun:) for him to read it also:D...It reminds me of him:p..hehe... *5*.. Keep on smiling:) & thanx for sharing your wonderful/passionate poem:D..~Best of Luck to your upcoming poems!!!~
*God Bless*

~!~Angels with Love that fly up to the glorious skies..Sedusha~!~

WOOOOW! really really amaaazing poem!!! "EXCELLENT" !!!! I loved it aloot!!! it was so deep !

Hun this was spectacular a really emotionally heartfelt poem that reminded me of my own boy and how much I love him - a really special poem for a really special someone who is very lucky to have you in thier life well done on a great poem
Luv Eirisa

I liked your poem, it waz so..... sweet.

I do like your work Sarah. This one is both loving and about love. (Thanks for your comments re: mine)

That poem is so lovely and i am sure that alot of other people like me go through that same sort of thing
WELL DNE HUNNI
with love xoxoxox
MaNdA*****

Sarah, I'm glad I found your poems. I've enjoyed each one that I have read. You are very talented and gifted, so keep writing. lol

Nice poem i really liked this one