sweet very sweet i hope it does last if you care for him that much

Cute poem! I really like the way you've written it. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more! If you get a chance check out some of mine.
-Kate

hey this poem is great... its so sweet... and it shows how much you love your baby... keep up the good work

That poem is hard. I liked it.

That poem is hard. I liked it.

that poem is super cute girl!!!! keep em' comin'

Great poem! i love it, and i know how you feel!

so lovely =) i really like ur poem =) i gave this one a 5 =)... hope u pass by mine sometimes... i wrote poems for my friend who passed away recently... much love... letishia

wow this poem is so0o0o0o about my b.f :-D gr8 job! and keep up the good work! LOVE IT!

<33Sammy

This poem tells the story of me and this one guy! Good job and keep up the good writing!!!!!

verrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy beautiful poem :) i loved it ... u have real talent ... i wish u two the best ... keep on the good work

hey was up?well i think ur poem is so great i loved it and i almost ended up in tears. it really reminds me of my boyfriend. its so cute keep up da good work cuz ur doing great so far.well i hope u get a chance 2 read my poems if u do plz vote and comment.ohh ur poems should be a 10.0 instead of a 5.0 well keep it up.much luv ur 1 and only,LADY PIMP.

I loved your poem. I know how you feel. It was so touching, and filled with happy thoughts. You should check out my poem "Un amie special," it hits the same note. Love is a wonderful thing.

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

Brilliant, simpley brilliant.

there isnt a 1000000 excellent button but this poem deservs it

Thanks so much everyone for all your comments they really mean a lot to me and I always enjoy seeing my poem on the top rated knowing that you all love it. Please keep the comments coming and you all are so great! thanks so much!

Beautifully written whatta lucky guy!

Kudos my friend a brilliant read!

Luv Eirisa

This poem was perfectly written. I loved it. Keep up the good writing! :)

Great poem. Thats so sweet.