by spunk Nov 17, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Trapped in a dungeon for many yeas |
Another awesome one, very emotional, and it sounded like it came from the heart, keep up the good work. |
by Allen
Very beautiful, I love reading it :) and Im sure you will find you heart's love... keep believing and be strong :) ...oh yeah, just an suggestion, for the last line on the first stenza, maybe changing it to "Until I find you, I would sore the sky" just to keep the rhyme consistant... but just my personal opinion ;) the poem is great the way it is :D keep up the good work, take care :D |