I L-o-v-e Y-o-u

by Dawn Manna   Nov 17, 2004


I i never met anyone like you
L love is what I feel for you
O our love is really true
V very few times have I ever felt this way
E everyone searches for someone like you
Y you mean the world to me
O others know how much I love you
U understanding is what you bring

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This is a really sweet poem. Acrostics are my favorite poems. I do suggest, well I'll just show you lol.

    "I never met anyone like you
    Love is what I feel for you
    Our love is really true"
    etc...

    Write it out that way instead. It would be easier to read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    Wow i liked it. . I know its hard to keep rhythm through an acrostic poem but you managed it well. . .Just a suggestion but would it look better if the words like made by the beginnning of the lines were split up. . .It would make funny stanzas but it would be obvious that it is an acrostic??

    I dont know Im being picky. . .Lovely poem and yet again full of emotions. .

    laura
    x

  • 19 years ago

    by XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ღX

    lol that was kool...i liked it good job!

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