lol that was kool...i liked it good job!

Wow i liked it. . I know its hard to keep rhythm through an acrostic poem but you managed it well. . .Just a suggestion but would it look better if the words like made by the beginnning of the lines were split up. . .It would make funny stanzas but it would be obvious that it is an acrostic??

I dont know Im being picky. . .Lovely poem and yet again full of emotions. .

laura
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This is a really sweet poem. Acrostics are my favorite poems. I do suggest, well I'll just show you lol.

"I never met anyone like you
Love is what I feel for you
Our love is really true"
etc...

Write it out that way instead. It would be easier to read. 5/5

marcella