i liek the last 2 lines best, great poem. by any chance coudl you rate and comment a few of mine?thanks:)

I can relate to this to! you are writing what I can't put into words. Great!

I loved this one too! You are a great poet. *5/5*

Aw, This is good! i love this line "Sometimes I just want to run away" Very good 5/5

natz x0x