whoever rated this poem a 1 is a complete loser!!! this poem is way better than that! that just makes me mad that someone would do that...don't worry they're just jealous of you wonderful talent! hehe, luv ya!

WAR=BAD
!!BOO!!!

Anywayz, flowed well, nicely done. bit funky at a part but stil a 5

Aken Sol

Hey man, contacting you from Germany to say that I liked it a lot!! Yeh, I'm definitely not in a critiquing mood right now, I'll get back to you in real life.