Who are you?

by Ele   Nov 17, 2004


Who are you to tell me,
that what i've done is wrong?
who are you to tell me?
you weren't there all along.
who are you to judge me?
who are you to know,
what i went through all this time?
believe me, you don't know.
don't feel free to judge me
you don't have any right.
you don't even know me
have you ever recieved such judgement from i?

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  • 18 years ago

    by SHoRTy

    I liked it comment some of mine some time

  • 18 years ago

    by Ele

    I don't even listen to the who

  • 18 years ago

    by Danny

    I sense that u stole that off of the who, but it was good

  • 19 years ago

    by Ele

    i admit it's not one of my best. i was a bit angry at certain people at the time

  • 19 years ago

    by in the realm of Chaos

    this is a well written poem. however, first things first:

    1)lines 5-7 are a bit awkard, try revising them

    2)in the last line, it should read "judgement from me" not I

    3) if you want to end ur poem with a question, dont. in rare cases its acceptable, but in most cases its not.

    GOOD CRITQUES:

    1) i like ur style and tone
    2) the rhyme scheme is catchy
    3) repetiveness of "who are you" leaves the reader open to interpretations.

    much devotion,
    inna