this is a well written poem. however, first things first:

1)lines 5-7 are a bit awkard, try revising them

2)in the last line, it should read "judgement from me" not I

3) if you want to end ur poem with a question, dont. in rare cases its acceptable, but in most cases its not.

GOOD CRITQUES:

1) i like ur style and tone
2) the rhyme scheme is catchy
3) repetiveness of "who are you" leaves the reader open to interpretations.

much devotion,
inna

i admit it's not one of my best. i was a bit angry at certain people at the time

I sense that u stole that off of the who, but it was good

I don't even listen to the who

I liked it comment some of mine some time