Wonderful poem, very discriptive, and it flowed wonderfully. Keep up the good work... Poems like these scare me, because I always wonder if the person would actually take their life. I hope not. Although I don't know anyone on this sight very well, I feel like I have a connection with most of the people. Mainly because I can relate. Well, Sorry for taking up space. I want to read more of yours, so please take care.

Jason

Wow, very deep and emotional. I really like it! keep up the great work!

its really amazing how you are able to come out with such describing words, i can always picture everything you write.
xo-Brittany-ox