bless it wos great and im crying cos thats wot happened to my friend it so so so sad i relli miss her

i'm crying right now. if the book is half as good as your poem it must have won an award. truly sensational!
xo-Brittany-ox

I love it!!! Its so sad I'm like crying... you captured it perfectly!!!
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OK I READ THE BOOK. A DANCE OF SISTERS..AND IT WASNT LIKE THIS..LOL
BUT I LIKE THIS POEM

that poem was really good * brought tears to my eyes * keep up the work 5/5 ..check out mah stuff

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

Great poem i love it 5/5