Please tell me

by Shadowed_Thoughts   Nov 17, 2004


Please tell me you need me
please tell me you love me
please tell me you wont leave me
please tell me she isn't the one you love now
please tell me we'll be happy again
please tell me we'll be together again
please tell me this isn't my last breath

-*comment and vote please*-

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shane

    It's a very nice poem. ^.^
    I like the last breath part, would it mean last breath you shared with him or last breath as to refer to not living anymore?

  • 20 years ago

    by Tarikins

    Awww good work krystal.....yet again!

  • 20 years ago

    by Gayle

    sound like me with my ex. words of true feeling

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    good poem!

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