Wow. The poem is great, and tells a lot, but the content is so sad! If this is really true, and you need someone to talk to, I can try to help. I can sort of relate to this... only in different ways. Take care!

~Ciao Lipton

this is very deep and so expressive. i could really feel the emotion pour out from your words. wonderful job!

Awesome poem. I loved it. Take Care.

This poem was just...wow!!!! I could really really really relate to this poem...wow! and you did an awesome job writing it. Just for the records, your poems always have MAJOR impact on me..they're soo awesome!!! Keep it up!!
luv elizabeth

this is a great poem, ver sad though. if u ever need ne one to talk to... im here

so lovely. first, i wanted to let you know that your poems have tremendous effect, dont every think otherwise. i love this poem, i especially like the lines, "the haunting harmony of pain" i love how you worked in something beautiful, disturbing, and tragic all in one line.
"I'm broken down on all fours
Crawling on smoking embers
I'm that girl that lost her way
The one that no one remembers"
i absolutly love that stance, using 'smolking embers' as symbolism really got to me. and i loved the last line, "mimicking world of black" great job, i really connected with it.

its really dark. and sad. but really makes you stop and think...is this a true story? if so....wow.
xo-Brittany-ox