i am crying so much on this poem i seriously am because this is the say excat thing that happened with me and my ex when we broke up. it was a very sad poem and it was very touching poem i loved it greta job.
take care and i hope things are ok for you now.
-bobby-

i love the first 3 poems i have written about you there great and they really touch my heart

i LOVED this poem!! this was really good!! i dont really completly get why you had to leave him (in the poem). if you loved him and he loved you.....oh well, i hope i never have to do that.
can you read my 'Love Me Tonight' poem? I would like your feedback!!
thanx
**love all**

very emotional and full of feeling and completely heartfelt and sweet brilliant poem! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

Wow exellent poem showed true feelings but was very sad. I remember my final kiss from my true love and always will. Great job on this poem! If u would check out some of mine! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

very sweet poem... and again very emotional and powerful one too

as i read i can see whats happening too and picture it... u have got lots of talent and hope u keep writing

take care !