Her Choice

by ºCrimsonTearsº   Nov 18, 2004


Sad face
Teary eyes
This girl i see, she always cries
Razor blade
Slit wrist
She thinks when she goes, she'll never be missed
Dark blood
Dripping down
She lays down to die, doesn't make a sound
Eyes shut
Breathing slows
She's almost gone, getting close
Silence
No noise
She's dead. That was her choice

* I know it's s hit but i wrote it at like 1am in the morning ! Juz wanted to put it up *

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  • 19 years ago

    by Hayley

    i dont think is shyt at all i think its good. great poems. i like all of yours keep writing your very good. comment on some of mine when you get time.

  • 19 years ago

    by blÜE E¥ëd tëärs

    this poem is really good. definately not s hit

  • 20 years ago

    by Ann

    That poem was really well written. Not even close to s.hit. It had the same theme throughout which made it more interesting to read. Great poem
    Keep writing.

    -Ann

  • 20 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Short and simple, well written. It was just perfect in the way it says so much with just a few words.

    xx - Kalah, Take Care.!

  • 20 years ago

    by Confused Chick

    that was good even if u wrote it at 1 in da morning.lol

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