Forever More?

by Nicholas   Nov 18, 2004


In just a few days,
I will be gone.
But I have to wonder
could I be wrong.
Will you be there
when I return?
Or is this a lesson
that I must learn.
Will he move in
to take my place
Will you then
caress his face?
Or will you hold on
to what we now have?
Will you still love me
when I come back?
Oh, please tell me
I just have to know
Whether or not
I should let go.

Monday I am leaving for bootcamp and I wrote this to my girlfriend. I really don't want to lose her. But if I have to, I want to know before I go.

By the way, farewell fellow members. I doubt I'll be writing until after camp. So keep up the good work. It really does mean alot to many people.

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  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    WOW I know the feeling...My boyfriend is moving to Florida...don't worry if you guys are in love hopefully you will last! Good Luck We will miss you!

  • 20 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful job, Good luck in Boot Camp. Stay safe, God Bless lol

  • 20 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    um i dunno wut 2 say....

  • 20 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    keep writing even if its not on the web and then post them when ur back./......good luck in bootcamp

  • 20 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    I really enjoy this poem, its very well written and good, keep up your wonderful writting! if you could, would you comment on mine?
    Thanks,
    Sarah