I really enjoy this poem, its very well written and good, keep up your wonderful writting! if you could, would you comment on mine?
Thanks,
Sarah

Awesome poem...I cant really relate to the part about him hurting you by cheating and lying...cuz i lost my last relationship by cheating and lying to him..but check out my poems and tell me what you think when you have time

This is a very strong poem with a lot of feeling and emotion put into it. Good job.
-Kate