I hate society. Keep up the good work.

Wow! Amazing poem..very well written and great flow! I enojyed reading every line! Keep it up!!
~Chelsey~

Awesome poem....Great job....Thanks

Subtle change from a bleak and depairing point of view to a more angry and accusing perspective. Nice work.

There are some great lines in here ("I cry for a world that's bleeding") but the lines that really make the poem are the last few.

Awesome stuff.

wow, this is so wonderful sarah.
you're so talented.
love you,
marjan

great poem sarah. I was reading this again. and it was beautiful.
much love,
marjan