Pull me out.

by Paula   Nov 18, 2004


I'm drowning in my thoughts
so i'm putting my hands up for help
because i cant cope with what life has dealt.

I'm drowning in a sea of sadness
and theres no sign of help,
No one around to pull me out
will any one? Im starting to doubt.

I'm drowning in my tears
won't someone make it stop,
can't anyone see my fears?
please some one make it stop,
I'm drowning in my tears.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    I've been on both sides of this poem. There was someone I didn't help when I was afraid to intervine and he shot himself. Likewise I had a breakdown after almost a decade of depression, I was forced to get the help that for such a long time I fought against, love your work, Elisha

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    hey, thats good. nice job. i voted 5*****

    ~no more

  • 20 years ago

    by Jackie

    Fun to drown in such things, eh? Fun, Fun, Fun... Good job; well put

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