Perfect end

by candy   Nov 18, 2004


Perfect family
playful friends
till one night
all that ends

arrive home
moms not at the door
blood matted hair
laying on the floor

violent dad
crack on the head
added up
now shes dead

to much to drink
when he got home
her mistake
was being alone

hear a scream
from the back
little sister
beat blue and black

hear a shot
fathers done
got to angry
and grabbed a gun

families dead
can get through
didn't think this would happen
when i was two

perfect family
playful friends
and tonight
a perfect end

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  • 19 years ago

    by candy

    thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    Great poem that is really really good, i liked it alot, so sad, and it is so true now adays

  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    Great poem... i hope its not true

    take care
    xox Samz~*

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow this was great! Really loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    wow...u have been writing some really sad poems here lately.... u put urself in so many positions that is perdy cool. good poem ur so talented