My Bloody Love

by brittany   Nov 18, 2004


Letting out tears again,
Thoughts of him flash through my mind.
So clueless to my feelings,
So clueless to my pain.
Just want you to notice me for once.
For all your meaningless words, you still turn a blind eye.
You’re the reason why I scream,
Why my eyes are never dry,
Why inside I slowly die.
My soul sunken in and crumbled.
Like the dry leaves on the ground.
I cannot go on withering.
I need you now.
Take a knife and write your name on the bathroom wall in my blood.
Maybe then you will see,
I’m not okay.

* Plz comment on my poems so i kno what u guys think. It means a lot to me adn i promise if u comment me i will check out some of ur stuff thanx!!!

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  • 20 years ago

    by HeAvENLy UniQue

    WOaWhz... this poem sure is dArK... damn... I feel what your saying in this poem... this poem is deep.. and I viewd it in my mind.. just exactly how you wrote it... sad....

    gr8t job.... >>5

    CyN*

    p.s. chek out more of my poems;)..

  • 20 years ago

    by Lipton

    Well, even if it's not personal, it's still a good write!

    ~ciao Lipton

  • 20 years ago

    by brittany

    LOL my poems arent personal but thanx fro the concern : )

  • 20 years ago

    by Allen

    Be strong, you can make it through :) This poem came from the heart and shows your emotion well, keep up the good work, take care :)

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