wow....this is amazing. the ways you put the ords together and the imagery you use is impecible. absolutly beautiful poem, probably my favorite from you. i love how you blamed the tragedy on nature and used the line, "that those loving waters could so coldly swallow" it really symbolizes how something can seem so accepting and loving, then quickly betray all of your trust and completly crush everything you had grown to be a part of. fantastic job, words cannot describe how amazing and talented this poem is.

Beautiful Poem...Great writing