Amazing poem...so sad...xxxxxxxx good though |
by Allen
Wow, thats a really well writen poem, shows so much emotion :) that was really great... very sad tho. I wish you all the best, hope things will work out well for you :) keep up the good work, take care :) |
by Andrea
wow! excellent poem. the emotion and pain felt so real. this is very well-written. great job!! |
by *Elizabeth*
WOW!!! wicked poem! |
by paperdoll
So many poems on this sight are all about wallowing in self-hatred over self harm. This one did a bit of that, but the final few lines from, "You remember how" stopped me from dismissing it completely... besides, I'd be lying if i said I'd never written any morbid cutter poems. Liked the cynicism the last line held. Good stuff. |