Comments : The Persuasive Blade

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Amazing poem...so sad...xxxxxxxx good though

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 20 years ago

    by Allen

    Wow, thats a really well writen poem, shows so much emotion :) that was really great... very sad tho. I wish you all the best, hope things will work out well for you :) keep up the good work, take care :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! excellent poem. the emotion and pain felt so real. this is very well-written. great job!!

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW!!! wicked poem!

  • 20 years ago

    by paperdoll

    So many poems on this sight are all about wallowing in self-hatred over self harm. This one did a bit of that, but the final few lines from, "You remember how" stopped me from dismissing it completely... besides, I'd be lying if i said I'd never written any morbid cutter poems. Liked the cynicism the last line held. Good stuff.