i get the message but i don't think the poem was well arranged and worded so i gave u a 3 but i really liked the message u are trying to send

yeah but i wanted to get it down so i wouldn't forget it. but i couldn't think of a better way to say what i wanted

this poem started out like this,

november angels will fly, fly away from their pain. fly away from this world. away from this place, out of the world of the insane.

not sure which is better. ohwell

hey there... awesome work.. Keep on writing... Best of luck to you..

thanks.