Wow, i really like that poem! *God that sounded so lame* but seriously, i like it. It is really nice sounding, normally i do not like rhyming poems but your's is really good. You made it work.

thank ou very much, i do have i non-ryhming poem i'm about to sumbit called "the man" that you may want to check out. but i did put alot of work into makeing the rithem in this poem perfect. so again, thank you :)

wonderful poem! i love the style and the way it flowed. excellent job!