by Lost but Smiling Nov 19, 2004
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Both men stood and shook Carson and Ana's hands. The one man was about 5 feet 10 and his boyfriend was roughly 6 foot. "My name is Landon, and this is my err-um-partner Sebastien." His eyes searched to how they reacted to the word "Partner". When they realized that it was OK, with the twins Sebastien gave a sigh of relief. Ana sat down next to her brother, taking in the prospective parents, Landon was the shorter of the two, with impressive blue eyes and jet black hair, his skin was olive, he was good to look at. Sebastien, had Carson's hair color, unlike Carson, his eyes were light brown, they held a sense of mystery that made him interesting. Ana decided that on first appearances, she liked both men. "So, how old are you two?" Sebastien asked. That was how all interviews started out, even though they already knew. "Sixteen." Carson replied politely. "Oh, so you two are what juniors?" "Yes that is correct," Ana replied to the question. Their junior year had just started only 2 months ago. "So what extra activities do you two participate in?" "Well, I really really enjoy Math. But, I am especially fond of Anatomy. I would really like to be a doctor someday." Carson replied. "What about you Ana?" Landon asked, his eyes measuring her, "Music. I play guitar, piano, and bass. Daddy was going to teach me to play drums...but well, he couldn't. But I am in a band. Jimmy Cracked Corn. I do lead guitar and lead vocals." They looked shocked. "Wow, so a musician and a future doctor...That is really neat." Landon said. "So..." he said slowly, "are either of you seeing anyone?" "I'm not, my girlfriend and I just broke up recently." Carson said, his eyes glazing slightly. Ana felt her brothers hurt, she always could. "I am." She said. "Really? What is his/her name?" Ana blushed, "Willie. He is the bass player in my band." She replied. She didn't know why she was feeling so nervous around these men, they were gay! Maybe it was because she just thought that she could really see herself living with them. "Well, now that we have information on you, why don't you two ask us anything that you want." Sebastien suggested. Carson seemed to be brimming with questions. "So where do you guys live?" "About an 15 minutes from here." "Um, so if we did come and live with you guys, would you Annie and I go to the same school that we go to now?" "Yes." "What do you guys do for a living?" |
Thank you...i didn't even think of the gay thing when i wrote that...THAT'S ME!!! a total space case *frazzled* heh heh, anyways, ty you very much people! |
OH OH the mother was an author.... SHE ME... lol joke... But i think you might want to edit out "like a gay mans laugh would be." don't want to stereotype people.. Maybe just say his laugh was softer than most mens or something like that... I don't know... but just not "Like a gay mans"... Someone might take offence... ANYWAYS besides that i really really like it.... I like Annie... She rocks... I think Carson is kinda shy... this was really good.. great details to the characters and converstaion... Keep going... |
by courtney
rachel its great keep it up |