rachel its great keep it up
~cort~

OH OH the mother was an author.... SHE ME... lol joke... But i think you might want to edit out "like a gay mans laugh would be." don't want to stereotype people.. Maybe just say his laugh was softer than most mens or something like that... I don't know... but just not "Like a gay mans"... Someone might take offence... ANYWAYS besides that i really really like it.... I like Annie... She rocks... I think Carson is kinda shy... this was really good.. great details to the characters and converstaion... Keep going...

Thank you...i didn't even think of the gay thing when i wrote that...THAT'S ME!!! a total space case *frazzled* heh heh, anyways, ty you very much people!